The Friday Paper · Grower · ages 9-14
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1. A Note Under the Door
The hammer rang once. A spark jumped off the anvil and did not go out. It waited. They followed.
It rolled into the print shop and settled on the big black press. It was Tuesday.
The newsroom door had a new hinge. Beside it, someone had scratched a tiny hammer.
Danya opened the newsroom door, and a folded note slid across the floor. Somebody had pushed it underneath.
He opened it. It said, in neat pencil:
Your bake-sale number is wrong.
There was no name.
Danya found last week's paper. Page one: BAKE SALE RAISES £430 FOR THE LIBRARY.
"Which number?" he said. "There are three numbers in that story."
Which number is wrong? See if you can work it out before the end.
2. Page Eight
Beto went red. He had typed up the bake-sale story.
"It might not even be wrong," he said. "And if it is, I'll fix it quietly. Small print, on page eight. Nobody reads page eight."
A small tidy rabbit came out from behind the filing cabinet. She had a red pen behind one ear and a green pen behind the other. Her name was Errata.
"Maybe nobody noticed," said Beto.
"Somebody noticed," said Errata. She held up the note. "And nobody trusts a paper that hides. Walk towards the mistake, not away."
"But it's embarrassing," said Beto.
"It is," said Errata. "That's why it matters."
3. The Cash Book
"First, find out if it's really wrong," said Danya. "How do we know?"
A small mole in a dusty vest was already at the door, with a little lamp on her head. Her name was Deed.
"Go to the original," said Deed. "Not last week's paper. Not what somebody remembers. The cash book."
The school treasurer kept the cash book in the office. It was a big handwritten book with columns.
Deed found the page. Bake sale, Friday the 3rd. Eighty-five cakes sold at four pounds each.
Danya worked it out. "Eighty-five fours. Three hundred and forty."
"Three hundred and forty," said Deed. "The cash book doesn't forget."
Beto looked at his story. He had written 340 in his notebook. When he typed it, his fingers had swapped the three and the four. Four hundred and thirty.
"Ninety pounds too much," said Beto quietly.
"The library was going to buy books with that money," said Danya. "They planned for four hundred and thirty."
"Then they need to know today," said Deed. "Before they spend it."
Danya ran to the library with the cash book page copied out in his own handwriting.
4. As Big as the Error
"So we print a correction," said Danya. "On page one."
"Page one?" said Beto. "Everyone will see."
"Everyone saw the mistake," said Errata. "It was on page one. So the correction goes on page one. As big as the error."
She took out her pens. "Say what we got wrong. Say what is right. Say how it happened. Then say sorry."
Beto looked at his shoes. "I'm the one who typed it."
"The paper printed it," said Danya. "I checked the page and didn't see it. We got it wrong. Not just you."
Beto looked up.
5. Friday
At four o'clock on Friday, the press thumped. Page one had a box at the top with a thin black line round it.
CORRECTION. Last week we said the bake sale raised £430. It raised £340. We swapped two digits when we typed the story. We are sorry.
On Monday, a second note came under the door.
Thank you. Now I trust you more, not less.
Beto cut out the first Corrections box and pinned it to the newsroom wall.
Back on the Green
The spark dimmed to a warm dot and settled back on the anvil. The Green was just the Green again.
At dinner, Beto told his mum he had broken her favourite mug that morning and hidden it in the cupboard.
"Thank you for telling me," she said.
Saved. The next chapter will be here whenever you come back.
Who you met
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Beto a child of the Green Takes things apart -
Errata When you get it wrong, say so as loudly as you said it from NewsForge -
Deed Go to the original document, not a summary of it from NewsForge -
Danya a child of the Green Asks "how do we know?"
Every recurring character has a short tune, so you can tell who is on stage before a word is said. The tunes play only when you tap, and the Reading Access sound switch turns them off.
The Honest Page
Which parts of this story are true, stretched or made up?
True
- Eighty-five cakes at £4 each is £340, which is £90 less than £430.
- Newspapers publish corrections when they get something wrong, and many have a standing corrections column that says what was wrong and what is right. Source
- Swapping two neighbouring digits, like 340 and 430, is so common in typing and bookkeeping that it has a name: a transposition error. Source
Stretched
- The correction went on page one, as big as the mistake. What we simplified: Many real papers put corrections in one regular spot; the rule most follow is to make them easy to find.
Made up
- The bake sale, the note and the cash book are made up. Deed and Errata come from NewsForge.