✍️ CastDojo
Two designers, two lessons
A real case · you decide
Lio and the swap test
Lio — a 16-year-old designing a fractions cast for his cousin
Lio named his characters Half, Third and Quarter. His cousin liked them, but could not say what a third was.
Half, Third and Quarter all did the same thing in his chapter: they walked to a bakery and smiled.
Lio tried the swap test. If Third did what Half did, would anything break? No — nothing changed.
What should Lio change first?
If you could swap two characters and nothing breaks, neither of them is teaching yet.
A real case · you decide
Esmé watches more than she talks
Esmé — a 17-year-old playtesting her chapter with her 7-year-old brother
Esmé read chapter one aloud. Her brother stopped at the page where Splitter shares the berries.
He frowned and counted the berries again. Esmé wanted to explain.
She counted to three in her head instead.
He says, “It isn’t fair.” What does Esmé do?
The playtest is for the author to learn. The younger reader is the expert on what confused them.
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